Sunday, September 20, 2009

Not Quite Iambic Pentameter: Amanda's Middle Schoolers Write Poems

Today, one of the in-class assignments for my Yuri Junior High students was to write a poem. The poem was pre-formatted, a certain number of words per line, and a set number of lines, but the kids each made up their own poem. Some of them were pretty cute!!! The titles are my own invention.

Examples:

“Dolla Dolla Bill”

Money

Very Important

Buying, eating, living

I don’t have it

Sad.

“Treehugger”

For the world

Stop wars

Made peaceful countries

Don’t lose the forest

Absolutely.

“Don’t Stop”

Game

Push push

Push game over

Sad ritray push push

Achieve.

“Zen Master”

Zero

It’s beautiful

One and all

Zero is connecting always

All.

“Notetaking”*

Scrawl

Corner notebook

Born and vanish

Where is vanish scrawl?

Repeat.

*This poem was written by the girl who is my entrant for the upcoming Yurihonjo Speech Contest! She will be reciting a speech about Martin Luther King. She’s pretty awesome.

I hope you found these as charming as I did! My kids are really great, and I love reading the things they write to me. I’m planning to start a weekly optional “Letters with Miss Amanda” program so they can write to me if they feel like it, and I’ll return their letters with corrections and a reply written by me!

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